During my placement last week in Leeds, I
was given the chance to show Lord Whitney my newly updated portfolio. The last
time they saw my work was in December last year, shortly after their lecture at
uni.
Looking back, there has been a great deal
of changes since then as well as a big reduction in the number of pieces on
show. One of the more noticeable differences was the layout of each page. I
have completely changed the typeface and positioning of the text to try and
help make the text and illustration compliment one another. Previously, I felt
like they were fighting against each other that subsequently made the page look
almost awkward. In my new logo, I have tried to reflect the use of symbols that
often appear in my work, and therefore it seems to fit much more comfortably
amongst the illustrations.
Both Amy and Bek thought that these changes
to the presentation of my work looked better and made my imagery stronger. The
usage of negative space was another thing that mentioned and complimented me on
as beforehand; each illustration was quite flush to the page. They spoke to me
about how sometimes the space around the illustration is just as important as
the art itself. If the work is too big on a page, it can look cluttered and not
do the artwork any justice. You focus on the layout being wrong rather than the
image being right. This is exactly what I had intended on doing so was really
happy to hear this. Another thing that they mentioned was the evident
progression over the last 4/5months. They really liked the work I had created
for my major project, especially the Raven pattern. They suggested that I play
around with the combination of shapes more and further this way of working as
they thought it was a visually strong piece. Using patterns in my work seemed
to come really natural to me when I made this and have every intention to do
more pieces based on geometry. I enjoyed creating it and it was something new
to me as well, which is always good.
Other then that, the only other thing that
was mentioned was the promo packs that I made. Having something tactile seemed
to go down well as they were inspecting it for a good few minutes. The whole
intention of me making the packs was so that whoever I gave them too would take
a bit of time looking at them rather then just throwing a business card to one
side or deleting an email. I hoped that because it was evident that they were
hand made, people would be less likely to cast them to one side/the bin. They
said it was a fantastic thing to be able to send them out to clients/studios
that I was interested in as it’s something they can keep.
I’m glad I showed them my portfolio for a
second time, as I wasn’t sure whether to or not. It confirmed that I’m heading down the right direction and
was clarification that the little attention to detail really pays off.
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